Awesome! You should write it for NaNoWriMo! As said, the sentences are pretty choppy, punctuation wise. You need to make it flow. One other suggestion; it sounds more like a recount than a proper story. Maybe add some more description, adjective that story up! <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f600.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":d">:d</object>

Another vote for Australia!

Haha no problems. In essence: 1. You are sent info from Minetown (i.e. the map, chunks etc) 2. Your minecraft client processes and displays this information 3. Due to glitches with texture packs and orebfuscator, some of the wrong visual information is sometimes sent 4. You see valuable ores and think OMG, I'm so mining this! 5. You mine it, but only get the regular crap. 6. You shamefully retire to the corner, depressed that you didn't get a shiny emerald. That better? <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f61b.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":p">:p</object>

It is very cool. Pretty much no way to xray, unless you find some very sneaky and unheard of way to realter the packets being sent to your client. Though, alas, there are a few bugs with it. I still think it's worth it though <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f61b.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":p">:p</object>